An Experiment in Writing – Part 40: Blurbs, Pitches, and But-Then-Except

I’ve been in a creative frenzy lately. I’m closing in on the end of Fains I, and if I were a tailor I’d have half a dozen suits done by now.

Part of my work when approaching the close of a novel-length work-in-progress is making all the threads/plotlines resolve satisfactorily.

If you’ve read my work (and you should, you know), you know I love complex, multi-threaded plot lines.

I spoke with some readers over the past few weeks, and it turns out that’s one of the draws of my books; their complexity. I write submersive stories (I do work at it) because I enjoy reading such work.

But this experiment in writing isn’t about my work-in-progress, it’s about marketing both existing work and soon-to-be-released work.

Case in point, this experiment is based on my putting together a blurb for Empty Sky, finding an excellent example of blurb/pitch writing in When the Tides Held the Moon, and applying basic Pitch structure to see if I could duplicate it (or even come close).

In a (SETTING) a (PROTAGONIST) has a (PROBLEM) caused by (an ANTAGONIST) and (faces CONFLICT) as they try to (achieve a GOAL).

 
The basic pitch structure is above. Stay with me while I explore what makes When the Tides Held the Moon’ work so well (and feel free to disagree. Let me know in a comment).

 
Think I’m onto something? Take a class with me, schedule a critique of your work, or buy me a coffee.
Think I’m an idiot? Let me know in a comment.
Either way, we’ll both learn something.

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