How Jerry and Betty Became the Least Entertaining Couple in the Neighborhood (Intro)

In 1991 I was in a critique group. Members were scattered up and down the US east coast. We may have had someone from as far west as Chicago and I doubt it.

I had an idea for a story about someone going on a deep space mission to a world we know is inhabited by intelligent beings and who share nothing about themselves except their willingness to meet an Earth representative.

Yeah, okay, and big whoop.

Like at least two other stories I wrote at that time, I was not a competent enough writer to do them justice. One I’ve already rewritten (I think it’s more like three or four other stories. I’m going to play it safe and say there’s five), and so far first readers are giving it high marks.

What’s changed (more than anything else) is I’m developing the ability to read my own work as an editor would read it.

And oy!, does some of my work suck.

So beginning next week, How Jerry and Betty Became the Least Entertaining Couple in the Neighborhood (Part 1).

No Responses

Joseph Carrabis, Author Shopping Cart
I feel so empty...
Writing Mentoring


Interested in taking your writing to the next level? Want to take a class with other writers and authors perfecting their craft?
Check out Writing Mentoring.
Classes are held on Wednesdays. Each session starts the first Wednesday of the month and ends the last Wednesday of the month. Morning and evening classes available.

Are you a Member? Would you like to be?
Subscribers! Want to be Interviewed?
Sorry, this content is available to paying subscribers only


Watch previous interviews to learn what they’re like.

History
Tagalicious
About Me Americana Analytics Ecology Anthropology A Tale of the Northern Clan Atmosphere attr Author Interviews Author Tools Bear Bees Behavior Betrayal Birds BizMediaScience Blurbs Bobcat Body-Mind-Spirit Book Blogs Character Childhood Trauma Children's Stories Chipmunk Conflict Cons-Fairs-Expos Contest Covers Coyote Cozy Murders Creative Non-Fiction Crime Comedy Crime Thrillers Critiques Crow Curses Cymodoce Deer Description Dialogue Economy of Meaning Editing Emotions Empty Sky Espionage Expanded Awareness Experiments in Writing Exposition Fains I Fantasy Fiction Flash Fox Gable Smiled Gel Ink and Rollberball Gender Gothic Romance Great Opening Lines Hanging Tree Harvey Duckman Hawk Heal History Horror Humor Identity iMedia Interpersonal Relationships Jerry and Betty know Language Learnings Library of Congress Life Linguistics Literature Lively Discussions Lizard Love Story Magic Realism Marke Marketing Mayhem Midnight Garden Midnight Oil Midnight Roost Military Mood Music Mystery Myth Narration Neuroscience Newsletters Noir Non-Fiction Old Ones Opossum Owl Pace Performance Artist Personal Finance Personal Improvement Personality Philosophy Plot Podcast Poetry POV Psychology Rabbit Rabbit Hole 5 Rabbit Hole 6 Rabbit Hole 7 Rabbit Hole 8 Raccoons Readings Recovery Triptych Relationships Reviews Revision Ritchie and Phyl Rob and Joan Carter Romance RoundTable Scenes Science Fiction Search Self-Discovery Self-Help Setting Skunk Snake Social Sociology Spider Spies Spirituality Spoken Word Sports Stating the Obvious StoryCrafting StoryTelling Structure Style SubStack Susan Tag Tales of the Woods Tales Told 'Round Celestial Campfires Tension