No, we’re not actually back at chapter 42. I realized last month the time sequences of some chapters were skewed because, at this point in the novel, several things are happening simultaneously. That required some fixing. For example, this chapter 42 also has “Section V Mega Chapter 1” as part of its title. That’s because … Continue reading “The Alibi (A John Chance Mystery) – Chapter 42 Section V Mega Chapter 1 (part 1)”
(picking up where we left off…kind of…i reshuffled chapters last month. you’re use to it by now, right?) The Alibi – Chapter 43 Cisily lounged naked on the Lady Eglesia‘s maindeck after piloting it far enough out that Boston appeared only as a bright hump on the western horizon. A meteor burned across the … Continue reading “The Alibi (A John Chance Mystery) – Chapter 43”
Let me save you some time before reading this post by starting out as I did with Critiques: Online or via Email; Do you want to improve your writing? Are you willing to pay to improve? If the answer to either of those is No then read no further, this post isn’t for you. … Continue reading “Writing Mentoring”
More threads, more merging. The Alibi – Chapter 40 Cisily lounged naked on the Lady Eglesia‘s maindeck after piloting it far enough out that Boston appeared only as a bright hump on the western horizon. A meteor burned across the sky and she imagined it smacking into the Atlantic, boiling the ocean, tidal waves … Continue reading “The Alibi (A John Chance Mystery) – Chapter 40”
Threads begin to merge… I hope. The Alibi – Chapter 39 Vox and Morelli stood beside the Impala while an officer read Morelli’s ID into his shoulder mic. He handed it back. “Anything I can get you, Director?” “Tony’s fine. I’m good.” He looked at Vox. “You good?” Vox nodded while surveying the mayhem. … Continue reading “The Alibi (A John Chance Mystery) – Chapter 39”