An Experiment in Writing – Part 34: Editing

 
Okay, a big one.

Editing.

A word which often strikes fear in the hearts and minds of authors and writers and is meaningless to those not equally blessed, called, summoned, directed, …

Go ahead. Edit it. Pick a word which works for you and use it.

Or a paragraph.

Or character.

Or…

 
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PS) the correct quote is

Write on caffeine, edit on wine. – Richard Lewis

(notice how well i edit?)

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Fains I (A John Chance Mystery) Chapter 14 – Voices in the Sky

Well…here we are…in June…of 2025.

I’ve decided not to bore you with more rewrites of previous chapters. They happened, just not going to share them.

I can be merciful that way…

Fains I (A John Chance Mystery) Chapter 14 – Voices in the Sky

 
John knocked on Monique’s door Friday at 5PM. Behind him a red wheelbarrow held several bags looking for a dump to die gracefully in. He brought the bags in and set them down in her office.

“Martin says you got his rocket machine espresso maker to work without reading the instructions. Any truth to that?”
“You want a cappuccino?”

She pointed at circuit boards and wires he pulled from the bags. “That going to break my computer?”

“Want me to make you a better one?”

“Is that stuff legal?”

He shrugged. Two hours later there were two boxes with lots of blinking lights and lots of wires going from her phone outlet to her computer to her office phone. He gave her a set of earphones with a mike that should’ve had NASA stamped on them and pushed a button on the nearer box. “You can send and receive calls on your computer now. It’ll pop up a little window with the name and phone number of whoever’s calling you. You can make a phone book by pressing CTRL-K. And it’ll record messages people leave – even conversations you have.” He chuckled.

“Can you do that for my mobile, too?”

It took him another hour to slave her computer to her mobile.

“Any of this legal?”

He shrugged.

“Am I going to lose my real estate license because of this?”

He shook his head. “You going to tell anybody?”

“What do I owe you?”

He shrugged. “Thanks for the ride.”

He headed for her door. “You had dinner yet?”

He didn’t turn around. “No.”

“Your aunts know you do this kind of stuff?”

“I doubt it. You going to report me?”

“Hell no. I’ve got things I need. What’re you doing this weekend?”

“Making a TV.”

“With the reception we have in Acra?”

“Not that kind of TV. Mr. Martin watches overseas soccer games. I’ll bet he can get lots of other stuff. I want to watch what he watches. You going to tell him?”

She put her hands on her hips and prepared to deliver some sassy, come-hither charm and checked herself.

Poor kid’ll either have a heart attack or squirt in his jeans. Go for direct instead. “You going to let me know what he watches? Maybe it’ll be something I’d like. Maybe you can tape it for me. Fair enough?”


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It All Depends on What You’re Willing to See

There is a phrase which comes and goes in popularity – Believing is Seeing.

This phrase is usually on a background of a toddler interacting with a fairy, something Tinkerbellish.

I wonder if Tinkerbell will get the Wicked treatment at some point. They’ll find her turning tricks in a trashy bar’s bathroom in some third world miners’ camp.

Or in the far north at a logging or drilling camp.

Shows you the kind of day I’m having that the above is what I come up with, huh?

“Believing is Seeing” is publicly relegated to writers, crackpots, fantasists, and the like.

We don’t often associate it with sages and wisdomkeepers.

But if Einstein, Bohm, Pasteur, Archimedes, Copernicus, Chi Lin, Ramachanadran, Gush Ni Pur, and others hadn’t believed first they never would have seen what they did and our world would not be what it is.

Hmm…

Perhaps best to leave “Seeing is Believing” to the writers, crackpots, fantasists, and children, me thinks.

 

An Experiment in Writing – Part 33: Writer’s Block versus Writer Stuck

Writer Stuck – you know where the story’s going and not how to get there.
Writer’s Block – you have no idea what’s going on with your story, are dead in the water, and are two periods and a semicolon away from circle-filing the damn thing.

 
I am a firm believer that writers never get blocked, they get stuck. Pantzers are more likely to get blocked than Plotters, me thinks, and probably due to they’re not knowing where the story’s going to begin with (which is why I strongly encourage people to blend plotting and pantzing).

This experiment has some ideas of how to deal with both. Hope they’re useful.

 
Toing and Froing

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Fains I (A John Chance Mystery) Chapter 13 – Digging In the Dirt

Oh, how exciting! Another brand new never-before-seen chapter!

Enjoy.

Fains I (A John Chance Mystery) Chapter 13 – Digging in the Dirt

Stacey, khaki shorts, rainbow colored t-shirt, straw farmer’s hat, gardening gloves, and work boots, kneeled in some freshly turned earth at the end of her garden. Some garden stakes, seed packets, twine, a hand shovel and rake, and Frank Sinatra formed a half circle on her right, and her eyes went back and forth among them as she decided what to do next.

“Tell me I’m not Mr. Douglas, this isn’t Green Acres, and Larry Martin isn’t Mr. Haney, Frank. Please tell me that?”

Frank, stretched out in the sun, opened an eye, winked at her, and purred.

Something crawled up her bare knees and she absently swatted it.

The crawling sensation remained.

Not so much something crawling as something feeling. A sense of long antennae touching, tasting, testing.

She stood up abruptly.

Frank rolled on his back and waited to be scratched.

Stacey looked back where her knees met the earth.

Tiny green shoots waved back and forth, something she planted unnaturally animated.

She kneeled again, this time making sure her knees weren’t crushing the shoots.

Their movement changed. They reached for her, seeked her.

She watched them find her knees and gently brush against them while she scratched Frank’s belly.

The feeling wasn’t new.

She’d had similar experiences as a kid in the woods behind her parents house.

Pleasant and inviting, she took a glove off and touched one of the roving shoots with her fingertip.

The shoot gently twined around her. It felt like a kiss.

Someone whispered, “Ascolta.”

She looked around.

Nothing. No one.

Her knees itched. She stared at them. The soft green shoots had penetrated her flesh.

She watched their tendrils wriggle just under the surface of her skin, could feel them reach and burrow inside her thighs.

Ascolta.”

She snapped her head, stood quickly, and backed away.

The kitchen’s screen door clicked shut. Tom ran up to her. “You okay, Sis?”

Frank got up, arched his back, poofed his tail, hissed, and stood in front of Stacey facing Tom.

Tom stopped mid-stride. “What did I do?”

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