I continue sharing my attempts at poetry written during a workshop I took. I previously posted the first class’ meanderings.
This week the teacher gave us one line themes. My first effort is decidedly meh! My second effort (evidently) much less so. I read it to the class and several other students thanked me. The teacher said, “You took us some place.”
First up, a rift on “The hole wasn’t wide.”
Now, the poem of which the teacher said, “You took us someplace.” A rift on “There ain’t no water in your well.”
It’s definitely a poem and I can figure out the fixes.
Read the third class’ meanderings.